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    dots Submission Name: *Secretsdots
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    Author: Caotic_Disaster
    ASL Info:    16/F/Canada
    Elite Ratio:    4.03 - 447/349/148
    Words: 42
    Class/Type: Random Thoughts/Venting
    Total Views: 691
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    Bytes: 291



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    dots*Secretsdots
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    Secrets dwelling inside of us,
    Meant to bring together or tear apart?
    Between two people it should stay.
    But when it comes out,
    Why does it cause so much turmoil?
    Ripping apart relationships,
    With just a few private words,
    Passed between two.




    Submitted on 2006-10-30 17:02:33     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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    ||| Comments |||
      This is very true
    I cant tell you how many times I trusted a so called true Friend with something only to have it thrown back in my face by someone else
    This is why I am so Selective in who I call a True Friend
    I have been hurt way too many times in the past as I can tell you have been
    Please remain Positive
    and Please continue to write as it helps heal
    God Bless
    Ron

    Please if you get a chance I have posted 2 new writes to my page
    Please take a look and let me know what you think
    Thank You
    Ron
    | Posted on 2006-11-01 00:00:00 | by Ronswords | [ Reply to This ]


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