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    dots Submission Name: Death Beseech Youdots
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    Author: PolaroidMemory
    ASL Info:    18/F/IN
    Elite Ratio:    2.93 - 99/93/28
    Words: 86
    Class/Type: Poetry/Dark
    Total Views: 175
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 550



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       I really don't know why I wrote this, but I thought it sounded cool when I was done. Let me know what you think...suggest some changes if you want.


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    dotsDeath Beseech Youdots
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    Death, like a crow's wings, is black.
    Black as night and black as the cat.
    The cat that lurks as the full moon rises.
    And brings forth ghastly surprises.

    Hate, like the vampire's blood, is red.
    As red as the sun rising above our heads.
    The sun rises in morning, but what of night?
    It gets dark and there's no comfort from light.

    Death can creep up on you,
    Just like hate will sometimes do.
    Does that make us crazy?
    I don't know, maybe...




    Submitted on 2006-10-30 18:31:44     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      This is nice and Halloween-y kind of write lol. You did well with the description of death and hate, I applaud you! Keep it up, and keep this the way it is. I think its nice.

    ~Kiki
    | Posted on 2006-10-31 00:00:00 | by precious_poetry | [ Reply to This ]
      This was interesting. There isnt a thing i would change. I really enjoyed reading this. A very nicely done piece.
    | Posted on 2006-10-30 00:00:00 | by EL | [ Reply to This ]



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