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Velvet Dream

Author: DrunkOnShadows
ASL Info:    16/F/Ont
Elite Ratio:    3.76 - 66 /84 /49
Words: 96
Class/Type: Poetry /Love
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Velvet Dream

She's my velvet dream
Nothing more, not in this lifetime atleast
That ravishing autumn beauty that stole my world
And turned it upside down
She's my favourite nightmare to dream
That icy girl with the firey passion
My favourite hellish fantasy
Such a dark and decadent picture she is
So rich and radiant
So clear in my mind and so real to my senses
I can almost smell her, taste her, reach out and touch her
And in my mind, she can do the same
Because it's just a dream
My velvet dream
And nothing more

Submitted on 2006-10-30 19:52:23     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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