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    dots Submission Name: Apocalypsedots
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    Author: Vampiric Death
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    Words: 81
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    dotsApocalypsedots
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    Evil within,
    evil without.
    When in his presence,
    you want to shout.
    His power is great,
    his will never bent.
    Direct confrontation,
    we must circumvent.
    This evil man,
    this satanic child,
    Allows demonic forces
    run rampant and wild.
    He sits back and watches,
    hate is his face.
    His only objective:
    Destroy human race.
    I sneak up behind him,
    Cross hilted knife.
    I must succeed
    in taking his life.
    I cannot quit
    'til his neck I slice.
    I must destroy
    the Antichrist.




    Submitted on 2006-10-31 08:31:48     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      not that easy to kill him and his new world order. but kool write yo.
    | Posted on 2006-10-31 00:00:00 | by darkness | [ Reply to This ]
      'circumvent' - never heard this word before :) . Good old darkness in and darkness out. Loved the read, made me nostalgic. I know, I know, that wasn't supposed to be the intention but...damnit.
    | Posted on 2006-11-01 00:00:00 | by Porcelaine | [ Reply to This ]


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