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    dots Submission Name: Acheroniandots
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    Author: Dolor
    Elite Ratio:    4.64 - 64/85/51
    Words: 146
    Class/Type: Poetry/Satire
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    Even the highest lords are no match!
    Those sickly seaman! They lack!
    Might of a real man.


    Sickly souls without form
    Formless? Meaningless..
    They soak in mournful yearning
    A life lost

    They lost "gravely" that hour.
    They lost their lives (The sight!)
    And the mourning! It begins...



    But when will it end?!



    Oh those wretched screams I hear!
    The northern wailing far but near!
    Peace invokes the war's pleasantries.

    The most unpleasant,
    The most unclean,
    The most malignant!
    Of all nature’s machines.

    And of the deceased, if I may
    Curse you all this dark, dark day.

    (No lord can save you now! That is your fate; that is what binds us to this world. As your flesh corrodes and your brows rot to the ground, continue looking for the peace never found.)




    Submitted on 2006-10-31 11:11:24     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      Hyaw. Hey. Not bad, nig'.
    | Posted on 2006-11-01 00:00:00 | by Shuurinakisame | [ Reply to This ]



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