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    dots Submission Name: trick or treatdots
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    Author: LameMansTerms
    ASL Info:    36/M/Hermosa Beach, Ca
    Elite Ratio:    4.31 - 713/1012/165
    Words: 311
    Class/Type: Poetry/Serious
    Total Views: 1154
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 2018



    Description:
       I do this every year in my neighberhood....well I had to move from the last address well becauise the police were zeroing in on me so yeah but it was fun again this year hahahaha


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    dotstrick or treatdots
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    Trick Or Treat
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    The pitter patter I can't just ignore.
    Happy children wanting a trick or treat.
    Basically begging door to door
       for something to eat.
    I got something for you little tikes.
    Not like a Witch’s Brew
       or any Goblins Goul,
    but more like an apple from me to you
    chock full of razorblades in every bite.
    ---
    Halloween Night,
    an allowance to misbehave.
    The night MadMen crave,
    and Sicko’s wouldn’t trade.
    Personally, I have been counting down the days.
    Days till I make your parents regret…
    letting little Jimmy and Winnie,
    Spiderman and Snow White
    parade around on Psycho Night.
    ----
    As they come,
    hahaha it becomes so much fun.
    “One for you,
         and you,
    and what are you supposed to be?”
    “I’m a doctor” this little one says
    Hahaha –ironically funny
    You get two cookies.
    ---
    Some may say I am a sick man.
    But why I do this you could never understand.
    I could say reciprocating a childhood mishap,
    or my babysitter beating the crap out of me,
    or maybe because of the priest that told me secrets…
    with his penis.
    I’d howl at the moon, but I don’t know where it is.
    Wherever and Whatever it is,
    I simply hate fucking kids!
    ---
    A chaotic silent scene.
    A Vampire’s desire a Zombie's scream
    Last Night when the recipe came to me;
    To put a little love literally
    into each and every cookie.
    I put so much of myself into those treats.
    Cum get your Cummy Cookies
    You’re gonna wish you never came down my street.
    -Happy Halloween Everybody-

    lamemansterms




    Submitted on 2006-10-31 12:35:41     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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    ||| Comments |||
      i dont like it

    dont try to work on it
    it wont help you
    | Posted on 2006-10-31 00:00:00 | by gloomyanddoomy | [ Reply to This ]
      thixs is crapy
    | Posted on 2006-10-31 00:00:00 | by gloomyanddoomy | [ Reply to This ]


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