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    dots Submission Name: Yah so what if i talk to myself?dots
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    Author: bestdeceptions
    ASL Info:    17/F/SD
    Elite Ratio:    2.92 - 35/46/26
    Words: 165
    Class/Type: Misc/Misc
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    dotsYah so what if i talk to myself?dots
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    I wear my headphones so I donít have to talk to you
    Pretend there is but there is, but no sound is coming threw
    You hit yourself when you think I am asleep
    Go into the bathroom and come out a little more lifeless
    And I wish I could stop you but I know itíll do no good
    Youíre chained to a bridge or
    A concrete sidewalk I canít get through
    Maybe heíll fix the pieces
    Maybe heíll be the one you need
    But from what Iíve learned
    No one really can do what you think
    And yesterday I took a walk in the dark
    I screamed out loud but no one heard
    And later on I saw a man lie in the grass
    He was old, he was dying, sometimes itís hard to forget
    Someone elseís past
    But tomorrow feels different like it might be the last
    And you donít know you
    Just like I donít know me.




    Submitted on 2006-10-31 14:00:12     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      that was real awsome. yeah i feel like that all the time. i think its better to talk to urself. u cant get annoyed that way. and when yah not alone wear ur headphones all the time.

    | Posted on 2006-10-31 00:00:00 | by darkness | [ Reply to This ]


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