Sadness Eternal
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Sadness Eternal
Sadness leaking Leaking tears Tears dripping Dripping down Down forever Forever darkness Darkness closing Closing in In misery Misery eternal |
Submitted on 2006-10-31 18:00:02 Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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| You can be a very depressing person, you know that? I like this one. I'm not sure, but I'll think about adding it to my Favorites... --crimson echo | Posted on 2006-11-17 00:00:00 | by crimson echo | [ Reply to This ] | I've seen the last word-starting-the-next-line form before, but it's been awhile, so this was a pleasant surprise. I really like this, and i hope you continue writing like this, maybe going for longer sentences. Thumbs up. | ~Kane~ | Posted on 2006-10-31 00:00:00 | by Kane Martyr | [ Reply to This ] | Very original. I love it. I think I'll add it to my faves. I really loved the beautiful flow, very nice. Keep it up! | ~Kiki | Posted on 2006-10-31 00:00:00 | by precious_poetry | [ Reply to This ] | beautifully sad...i thought this was very well written. I like the set up of your poem. the flow was perfect. keep writting. | | Posted on 2006-10-31 00:00:00 | by EL | [ Reply to This ] | This is a great poem. I love how you continued with the last word of each line. I've never tried that and I would like to now that I've read it. I'm sorry that you are feeling blue at the moment. I hope you perk up soon. Great job. | Christina | Posted on 2006-10-31 00:00:00 | by Super_pudding | [ Reply to This ] | |
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