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Ink and Paper


Author: BleedingTears
ASL Info:    16/f/Neverland
Elite Ratio:    4.06 - 418 /289 /62
Words: 92
Class/Type: Poetry /Passion
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just something alot of people can relate to.


Ink and Paper



All the ink and paper that know how I feel.
The ink and paper accept what I have to say.
Feels my every emotion.
That can taste the bitter words.
The ink and paper that express and create my imagination.
Create the world inside my head,
with no color, no view.
The ink with nothing but dark.
The blank page of silence.
And oh, how beautiful they are.
With no paint and no canvas,
draws a picture,
of what it really means,
with nothing but words,
written in ink,
on paper.




Submitted on 2006-10-31 18:47:07     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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  This is really beautiful. Writing makes me feel like that too. You did a wonderful job! This poem is utterly amazing! One can see your love for words between the lines!
-Rose
| Posted on 2008-06-28 00:00:00 | by Roselize | [ Reply to This ]
  I like this one a lot. Being a writer, one must endure being taken less seriously than the more visual artists. "A picture is worth a thousand words." But I believe, often, so much more thought goes into a poem than a painting.
I like your vocabulary, and I like the focus of the poem. It has a calm feel, which I appreciate a lot.
| Posted on 2007-02-06 00:00:00 | by awastedsky | [ Reply to This ]
  this poem was so amazing and so true. it was so neat to read because as a poet i can relate to every word.
| Posted on 2007-01-24 00:00:00 | by shayla8911 | [ Reply to This ]
  This poem shows what it really means to be a writter. I never type my poems on the computer.. i carry around a little black notebook where i always write my ideas and thoughts. Pen to paper is much different experience. Good job

J. Ackson Jr.
| Posted on 2007-01-22 00:00:00 | by JAcksonJr | [ Reply to This ]
  this is very good, not only is art pictures its also poetry and i think you expressed that.
this is my favorite part

"The blank page of silence.
And oh, how beautiful they are."

sometimes silence is a wonderful thing.
i loved it,

*Kimmy
| Posted on 2007-01-15 00:00:00 | by Kimmy | [ Reply to This ]
  I like this.. Its simple and to the point... and its true.... I love your stuff...
| Posted on 2006-12-11 00:00:00 | by Creature | [ Reply to This ]
  wow i also love it!its so true.the paper cant lecture u on ur pain,or yell at u because of how u feel,the paper can only listen and accept what u write.I very much like this and agree

keep it up
safire
| Posted on 2006-11-24 00:00:00 | by girly101 | [ Reply to This ]
  <3ed it! Its true that ink and paper can really be the only one that understands your emotions sometimes.
Keep it up!
~David~
| Posted on 2006-11-01 00:00:00 | by D.C.M. | [ Reply to This ]
  Very amazing. Good expression of what writing really is, a gateway to your own world. Everyone should feel this when they write, or they arnt really writing with their heart. Good job.

~Kane~
| Posted on 2006-10-31 00:00:00 | by Kane Martyr | [ Reply to This ]


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