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    dots Submission Name: World of Nightmaresdots
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    Author: disturbedx1000
    ASL Info:    28/m/ny
    Elite Ratio:    3.67 - 204/326/124
    Words: 298
    Class/Type: Lyrics/Being a Teen
    Total Views: 754
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    Bytes: 1932



    Description:
       idk i wrote this over the summer and just found it. it has to do with me blaming myself for everything that went wrong in a relationship i had and a lot of other issues i delt with in my life.


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    dotsWorld of Nightmaresdots
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    do you ever wonder why i'm here?
    is any surprise that i could be scared?
    caught in a place of wonderous fear,
    this world of mine isn't so very clear,

    (whispering)
    did you ever dream a dream of nightmares?
    you have to be here to expeience what i fear,

    (chorus)
    i see you pearing into my nightmares!
    i am afriad of everything about myself!
    i feel like i am being torn apart!
    and i'm living in a world of nightmares!

    (end)

    i should be happy with my life,
    but i feel like i've lost it all,
    i should feel as if i am lucky,
    but i feel as if i'm nothing at all!

    (whispering)
    did you ever dream a dream of nightmares?
    you have to be here to expeience what i fear,
    trapped in a world of hate and humiliation,
    myself i bring apon my devistation!

    (chorus)
    i see you pearing into my nightmares!
    i am afriad of everything about myself!
    i feel like i am being torn apart!
    and i'm living in a world of nightmares!

    (end)

    is it any wonder why i am here?!
    is it any surprise how i could be scared?!
    caught in a place of wonderous fear,
    this world of mine isn't so very clear,

    IS IT ANY WONDER WHY I'M TRAPPED IN A WORLD OF NIGHTMARES!

    (chorus)
    i see you pearing into my nightmares!
    i am afriad of everything about myself!
    i feel like i am being torn apart!
    and i'm living in a world of nightmares!

    (end)

    i'm afriad of everything about myself!
    i'm living in a world of nightmares!
    IS IT ANY WONDER WHY I'M SCARED?
    WHILE I'M LIVEING IN A WORLD OF NIGHTMARES!!!

    NIGHTMARES! (echo X3)




    Submitted on 2006-11-01 15:09:19     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      Awesome! I put a SOAD music to it and it rocked. I really love your [censored] man. Still hoping you send me a copy of yalls cd one day. I wont hold my breath... Anyway, yea.. sweet song man, loved the lyrics.

    Holy xx
    | Posted on 2006-11-08 00:00:00 | by Holy Wood | [ Reply to This ]


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