Sucking on pennies

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Sucking on pennies

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Sucking on pennies was hard to do when you craved the real thing. Every day random guys flirting, I just wanting you feel it upon my tongue. It was hot and fulfilling, endless it seemed, I could drink of it forever. It’s what kept me going. To know that every guy would offer it willingly to me made me ecstatic, they craved me. All I craved was their blood.

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