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    dots Submission Name: The Circusdots
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    Author: _LexyMeNow_
    ASL Info:    18/F/Canada
    Elite Ratio:    2.17 - 12/15/17
    Words: 253
    Class/Type: Poetry/Serious
    Total Views: 138
    Average Vote:    5.0000
    Bytes: 1533



    Description:
       This took me the rest of my natural life haha no just a 1 o'clock in the morning one day!

    By Lexy Parker


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    dotsThe Circusdots
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    Try to visualize an uncanny sight
    Of make believe and life as it seems
    Of forced bars and sudden death
    Of burgeoning anger and life at its best

    Try to picture life as it is
    A cornerless pit
    A bottomless pit
    An infinte time

    Try to see the ways of the rule
    The world as it turns and batons as they spin
    Clowns as they joke, animals as they scream
    What is the reason for all this to be?

    Try to watch the play as it's on
    The forced over smiles, the face painted masks
    The act all the while, their lies obscure
    These are the lie that they try to hide

    Try to look at the whiplashing stroke
    It's survival of the fittest, it's dog eat dog
    It's its own dogma, it's itself underneath
    It's what it was brought up to be, made my man himself

    Try to imagine it as a sea
    The clausterphbia, that's not what it should seem
    Of life on one boat and life on one stream
    No bars and no strings attached

    Try to decipher whether it's all meant to be
    Try to think of its capability
    Faith at its peak, strength while you're weak
    All is needed if one has intended to seek

    Try to remember what you have learned
    That life is no fairy tale and life is no treat
    Try to uncover, the untold secrets
    Of life as it really is, as life as it should not




    Submitted on 2006-11-02 09:06:12     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      Interesting. View life as it should not. It's hard to picture life as anything but a fairy tale that will never come true or as a disaster that will never end. I had to read it a couple of times to let it sink through. This will definitely go on my favorites.
    Katana
    | Posted on 2006-11-03 00:00:00 | by Katana Ryoko | [ Reply to This ]



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