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    dots Submission Name: Abissdots
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    Author: Angel_91
    ASL Info:    15 female canada
    Elite Ratio:    1.62 - 0/0/1
    Words: 96
    Class/Type: Poetry/Death
    Total Views: 744
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 659



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    dotsAbissdots
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    Unwanted, alone, unloved.
    This is what I am today,
    Today, yesterday, everyday...
    Death, ending, suicide.
    This is what I am thinking
    As I feel my steps quickening.
    Betrayed, lied to, let down.
    I step up to the edge
    And look over the rocky ledge.
    Confusion, uncertainty, curiosity.
    Up my spine runs a shiver
    As I look down at the rushing river.
    Finished, terminated, the end.
    I feel my heart thump
    As I close my eyes and jump.
    Loneliness, solitude, rejection.
    These are the things I surly won't miss
    As I am surrounded by the cold abiss.




    Submitted on 2006-11-02 11:50:46     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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