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    dots Submission Name: Sacrilegiousdots
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    Author: unknown soldier
    ASL Info:    17/kenner, La (N.O)
    Elite Ratio:    3.58 - 1348/1346/203
    Words: 702
    Class/Type: Lyrics/Serious
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       i kinda gave up on religion and i just wrote idea/ theories on it


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    Yeah elder niggas are wise so I took the old oneís advice
    He said ďnever fuck with God or the Holy OneĎs WifeĒ
    Cuz heíll tighten the grip on your soul and your life
    Itís your very existence that he holds in a vice
    Itís too bright
    Taking my eyes and closing em tight
    And every step gets harder as Iím approaching the light
    One God, so why canít Mohammed and Moses unite?
    Because God failed to take the Anti-Christ and remold him as Christ
    So I guess he isnít infallible
    We disregard the knowledge thatís valuable
    But we search for X like the amount of a variable
    Trying to use mathematicalÖtheories
    That seem applicable to the Bibleís hypocritical parables
    Itís curtains but donít call it theatrical
    Cuz I oppose the self evident truths as infactual
    But itís actually my beliefs that question your dogma
    Til the Pope pops me off and altar boys watch my body float in the harbor

    Whatís the purpose?
    It isnít to sew seeds of discord
    I just wanna show yíall how I see the Lord
    With faith, doubtís something you canít afford
    So ignore me and act as your pastor accords
    Here to show my perspective, not to ask for rewards
    These bastards, live by the Bible but they convert by the sword

    When I get assassinated Iíll go to a martyrís heaven
    Cuz the slug hit my cerebellum
    And made my brain explode like watermelon
    They caught the felon
    Call him the perpetrator
    The new Judas, the perfect traitor
    For a little cash heíll love me now and murk me later
    But my deathís worth every dollar so he deserved the paper
    I thought it impossible like when Mr. Rodgers deserts his neighbors
    But my dawg was covert
    When he alerted me that the cohorts in my inner circle were starting to taper
    I saw my demise through the eyes of a blind sooth-sayer
    Death is the truth prayer
    So every murder removes a new layer of sin
    In the game of the After-Life only a few players can win
    So I put my game face on and follow the Way of the Wind
    Til I meet my destiny and I have to face my Creator again
    What if Lucifer ran shit and it was my Maker thatís making me sin?
    Whatís the purpose?
    It isnít to sew seeds of discord
    I just wanna show yíall how I see the Lord
    With faith, doubtís something you canít afford
    So ignore me and act as your pastor accords
    Here to show my perspective, not to ask for rewards
    These bastards, live by the Bible and convert by the sword

    Many believe Jesus will return through immaculate conception
    But the new Maryís not a virgin and Joseph is always packing contraception
    He uses up a sack of protection
    And the Viagra just to make sure he has a lasting erection
    Itís like their moving in a backwards direction
    Til Mary told Joseph that she had a confession
    Sheís pregnant with Jesus but they couldnít support him
    So Joe said itís important to abort him
    They hopped in the Ford to report to the clinic
    Their task was specific, to give a bloody doctor a visit
    And when the deed was finished
    It felt like the Hope was diminished
    Every light on the globe was extinguished
    And the chaos and sense of evilís replenished
    Since darkness looms cuz the Savior resides in a trash can as a tomb
    Humanityís doomed cuz our only Hope was ripped outta the womb
    Atheists see it as the death of a fetus
    While the world is crying, in silent mourning for Jesus
    Mary said ďIĎm sorry but we wouldnĎt have been able to feed yaĒ
    You see, she was a hooker and Josephís a preacher

    Whatís the purpose?
    It isnít to sew seeds of discord
    I just wanna show yíall how I see the Lord
    With faith, doubtís something you canít afford
    So ignore me and act as your pastor accords
    Here to show my perspective, not to ask for rewards
    These bastards, live by the Bible and convert by the sword




    Submitted on 2006-11-02 11:51:03     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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    ||| Comments |||
      hi, and you repeat them. poe
    | Posted on 2006-11-02 00:00:00 | by poetotoe | [ Reply to This ]
      Good song but only for the words not for the subject.
    Katana
    | Posted on 2006-11-02 00:00:00 | by Katana Ryoko | [ Reply to This ]
      I love this! Its brilliant. Perfect..... and WELCOME BACK STRANGER. been a while since we have heard from you and with lyrics like yours you are deffinitly missed.

    AL
    | Posted on 2006-11-03 00:00:00 | by Amanda Lynn | [ Reply to This ]


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