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    dots Submission Name: Baby I woulddots
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    Author: EmeRalDEyeZ5491
    ASL Info:    16.female.Ohio
    Elite Ratio:    2.1 - 130/137/105
    Words: 111
    Class/Type: Poetry/Depressed
    Total Views: 861
    Average Vote:    3.6667
    Bytes: 617



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    dotsBaby I woulddots
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    If I could sweep away your pain with a broom
    Baby I would sweep away
    If I could take away your sense of doom
    Baby I would in a heartbeat
    If I could fill the emptiness within your soul
    Baby I would find some cement
    If I could kill the ugly troll that did this to you
    Baby I would find a gun
    If I could simply heal you by smiling up at you
    Baby I'd smile untill the end of time
    If I could take away her memory
    By holding your hand
    Like said in Titanic, Id never let go
    Baby trust me I would






    Submitted on 2006-11-02 12:06:03     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      this is a very sweet and simply written poem. I liked it. the only thing i think that could be changed is when you say "Like said in the Titanic". thanks for sharing and keep on writing.
    ali
    | Posted on 2006-11-02 00:00:00 | by Ali Marie | [ Reply to This ]


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