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    dots Submission Name: WHen the Child Diesdots
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    Author: lori_tab
    ASL Info:    27/f/alabama
    Elite Ratio:    4.33 - 1752/1517/481
    Words: 195
    Class/Type: Misc/Serious
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    dotsWHen the Child Diesdots
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    Apart from her lovely Auburn lashes, that she batted casually, and under chocolate brown painted lids

    Dirty drops of water welled up near her splashes of green, threatening to overflow and destruct her sight

    Let's talk about the Dhali Lhama
    Balance

    "Energy is neither created nor destroyed"

    Her vioce carried through the empty room. "WHere does the energy go?"
    The silence answered silently.

    a red slame and laced with gold, her sighs.
    She sighs.
    And closes lovely lashes.
    Pressure makes the water fall.
    The water trickled down, cuts her skin.
    Angry skin.
    Swollen and pregnant.
    A child, something born
    he was born and then there was why
    when he dies
    (are you following)
    Enerygy is neither created nor destroyed
    where does the energy go?
    when the child dies
    What kind of energy is our soul?
    What soul, I don't even belive souls exist!
    It doesn't matter

    And then an echoe from the corner of the empty room
    And then another voice waves
    "where does..."

    The energy go
    The energy comes
    "From where?"
    I don't know
    You don't.
    No.
    I don't.
    Well.
    Damn.




    Submitted on 2006-11-02 12:15:20     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      Makes me think of the energy conversation we had at grandmas. Also like the description of lashes and water cutting her skin. Other than that, I am extremely confused.

    Then again, I just took an inkblot test online and it said I had ADD. Could be true.
    | Posted on 2006-11-02 00:00:00 | by Raivn | [ Reply to This ]


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