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    dots Submission Name: *Take Away My Pain(revised #1)dots

    Author: Caotic_Disaster
    ASL Info:    16/F/Canada
    Elite Ratio:    4.03 - 447/349/148
    Words: 88
    Class/Type: Poetry/Misc
    Total Views: 791
    Average Vote:    5.0000
    Bytes: 533

       still needs some work but..ya here it is

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    dots*Take Away My Pain(revised #1)dots

    Take away my pain
    Throw it out the window
    Make me reborn
    By your tender words
    Soft caresses
    And deep looks of affection

    Take away my pain
    Take my hand and donít let go
    I will be yours
    But first you have to make your move

    I get butterflies in my stomach
    And frogs in my throat
    Every time I see you I get excited all over again
    As if it was the first time
    And I asked you
    To take away my pain

    Submitted on 2006-11-02 15:07:29     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      This is really deep Caotic
    In this Write I feel the need for this person to Have someone anyone in their life to understand how they feel and to help them to heal from all the years of pain they have lived
    If this was me the first people I would look to is my Family for they are truly the Best Friends in my Life
    You have a way with your words Shannon and Shelby
    Every one of your writes I can easily relate to
    Excellent Job
    God Bless
    | Posted on 2006-11-06 00:00:00 | by Ronswords | [ Reply to This ]

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