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    dots Submission Name: friends come with back stabingdots
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    Author: bleeding_sin
    ASL Info:    16/F/OR
    Elite Ratio:    3.03 - 54/68/57
    Words: 88
    Class/Type: Misc/Misc
    Total Views: 586
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    Bytes: 499



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       i over heard my sopossed to be best friend talking about me and i became in raged so i wrote this you can look at this every time you get mad ok


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    dotsfriends come with back stabingdots
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    bitch
    you vent to all
    you say crule things
    but not to my face
    what a disgrace
    what the hell did i do to you
    for you to backstabe me like that
    i cared for you and keep your secrets
    why such betral
    friends forever what a lie
    you backstabed me
    and made me cry
    what a friend
    to steal and lie
    you jaded me
    no more
    this time my plan will be born
    and revenge will be mine




    Submitted on 2006-11-02 15:25:19     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      agreement with Azuire. this was a good write. im on the level about the whole friend-[censored] thing. revenge may be sweet at first, but it soon sours. keep that in mind. keep it original.

    i tip my hat and bid thee farewell.
    | Posted on 2006-11-04 00:00:00 | by PoeticNonsense | [ Reply to This ]
      What a load of venting! Except for a couple of spelling errors here and there, this is quite allright.
    Yeah it's often few people value their best friend.
    Is it a coincidence that some parts are rhyming?
    Cheers
    Azuire
    | Posted on 2006-11-03 00:00:00 | by Azuire | [ Reply to This ]


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