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    Author: mimi
    ASL Info:    30/f/ny
    Elite Ratio:    3.66 - 597/390/111
    Words: 31
    Class/Type: Poetry/Misc
    Total Views: 1235
    Average Vote:    5.0000
    Bytes: 184



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    dotsWhendots
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    When did my eyes
    start to reflect the past
    instead of the future?
    You look and see my tears
    my lessons, my reasons,
    my soul and my seasons.




    Submitted on 2006-11-02 16:11:42     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      All I can say is nice...
    Short and sweet, & Painful.
    a back door Hiku. Thats true blue of you.

    The Poor Man's Poet.
    | Posted on 2006-11-02 00:00:00 | by Bobby K | [ Reply to This ]


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