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Submission Name: When dots

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Author:	mimi
ASL Info:	30/f/ny
Elite Ratio:	3.66 - 597/390/111
Words:	31

Class/Type:	Poetry/Misc
Total Views:	1235
Average Vote:	5.0000
Bytes:	184

Description:
TO BE CONTINUED

When

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When did my eyes
start to reflect the past
instead of the future?
You look and see my tears
my lessons, my reasons,
my soul and my seasons.

Submitted on 2006-11-02 16:11:42 Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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All I can say is nice...
Short and sweet, & Painful.
a back door Hiku. Thats true blue of you.

The Poor Man's Poet.
| Posted on 2006-11-02 00:00:00 | by Bobby K | [ Reply to This ]

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Be kind, take a few minutes to review the hard work of others <3 It means a lot to them, as it does to you.

Be kind, take a few minutes to review the hard work of others <3
It means a lot to them, as it does to you.