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    dots Submission Name: Dear John Part Idots
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    Author: BloodtornAngel
    ASL Info:    21/F/inyour wildest dream
    Elite Ratio:    2.47 - 21/28/43
    Words: 202
    Class/Type: Lyrics/Love
    Total Views: 1129
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 1164



    Description:
       A song my dad wrote when i was little i just changed the name of it.


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    dotsDear John Part Idots
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    I never thought I'd feel this way about you
    Never knew we would go so fastI want to spend all our time together
    I hope this is the one thats gonna last

    If you ever need a choulder to cry on
    baby you know you can cry on mine

    (Chorus)
    Because I open up my arms for you
    Let you fall right in my heart
    cuz i know
    its what it can be
    Let yourself melt in my soul
    Hope you never leave me in the cold
    well i know its what it can be

    Hold you tight all night long
    Hope you never leave me alone
    Cuz i know its what it can be

    Bridge

    I just can't stop thinking about you
    and i just seen you last night
    tell me you want me to be with yo
    and I'll make everything all right

    Dont be afraid to show me your feelings
    cuz if we fall in love it was meant to be

    (Chorus)

    Hold you tight all night long
    Hope you never leave me alon
    well i know
    its what it can be
    yeah,
    well i know
    its what it can be




    Submitted on 2006-11-02 18:09:40     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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