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    dots Submission Name: A Diffrent Lifedots
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    Author: drow
    ASL Info:    29/male/married
    Elite Ratio:    2.41 - 14/16/7
    Words: 91
    Class/Type: Poetry/Depressed
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    dotsA Diffrent Lifedots
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    Many times I sit and wonder,
    what would life be like
    if it had went other ways?
    Would my life be plentyfull as it is now?

    Maybe I would be alone.
    Could be rich and famous.
    Most likely in jail,
    or even buried in the ground.

    If I would have stayed in a town
    for a little longer,
    What would have happened?

    Out of all the things
    I have thought of,
    I would not change anything,
    because I might have missed
    all the experences I have had.




    Submitted on 2006-11-02 20:21:00     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      awwwwww, how sweet, what if you never met me, then that would be just devestating. lol.

    -Death-
    | Posted on 2006-11-03 00:00:00 | by DeathTone | [ Reply to This ]


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