A Diffrent Life

Author: drow ASL Info:    29/male/married Elite Ratio:    2.41 - 14 /16 /7 Words: 91

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A Diffrent Life

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Many times I sit and wonder, what would life be like if it had went other ways? Would my life be plentyfull as it is now? Maybe I would be alone. Could be rich and famous. Most likely in jail, or even buried in the ground. If I would have stayed in a town for a little longer, What would have happened? Out of all the things I have thought of, I would not change anything, because I might have missed all the experences I have had.

Submitted on 2006-11-02 20:21:00     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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awwwwww, how sweet, what if you never met me, then that would be just devestating. lol. -Death-

| Posted on 2006-11-03 00:00:00 | by DeathTone | [ Reply to This ]

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