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A Diffrent Life

Author: drow
ASL Info:    29/male/married
Elite Ratio:    2.41 - 14 /16 /7
Words: 91
Class/Type: Poetry /Depressed
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A Diffrent Life

Many times I sit and wonder,
what would life be like
if it had went other ways?
Would my life be plentyfull as it is now?

Maybe I would be alone.
Could be rich and famous.
Most likely in jail,
or even buried in the ground.

If I would have stayed in a town
for a little longer,
What would have happened?

Out of all the things
I have thought of,
I would not change anything,
because I might have missed
all the experences I have had.

Submitted on 2006-11-02 20:21:00     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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  awwwwww, how sweet, what if you never met me, then that would be just devestating. lol.

| Posted on 2006-11-03 00:00:00 | by DeathTone | [ Reply to This ]

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