Sex in here
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random song I did
Sex in here
(sing softly) Rain drops______ dripping on___ the window sill I'm watching time go by the winds pick up____and I'm_____standing still I'm feeling it go by The clouds rumble_____and I____feel the wind I'm watching life go by (quicker pased, louder) the clouds can rain on me lightning can strike me down but nothing compares to the pain I feel nothing can bring me down cause I'm already here I'm screaming inside but there's no sound you picked me up__then pushed me down you gave me hope__then you gave me fear you have reversed every thing you've done you clouded my mind that you made clear (sing softly) Rain drops______ dripping on___ the window sill I'm watching time go by the winds pick up____and I'm_____standing still I'm feeling it go by Houses flying_____and I____feel the wind I'm watching life go by Nothing can hurt me like you did cause you tore me apart you cant undo what you did why did you break my heart I think about you all the time even in my nightmares constantly scaring me with all your horror bringing tears like barbwire you ripped me all to shreds leaving pieces here and there mentally in anguish like your embedded in my ear (sing softly) Rain drops______ dripping on___ the window sill I'm watching time go by the winds pick up____and I'm_____standing still I'm feeling it go by The clouds rumble_____and I____feel the wind I'm watching life go by |
Submitted on 2006-11-02 22:10:11 Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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| You know, this is the best thing I've read in awhile. I recently (being within a week) broke up with my boyfriend who meant the world to me... and i know what you mean when you say time passes by... i notice that when I sit on the front porch and smoke a cigerette... the world seems to pass my by.. and I just sit there... and watch.... and think. I'm gonna add this to my favs. P.S. I loved that the title really had nothing to do with the contents of the poem. Excecpt for maybe how it feels to be stuck in a stuffy house when it's raining outside. Much love, Cat | Posted on 2007-10-10 00:00:00 | by dancer06 | [ Reply to This ] | This was interesting. Not at all what I thought I was getting into by the title. It could use a little bit of refining because the flow is off and it feels rather choppy. If that was what you were going for though, it is rather good. I like your word choices here. I apperciate the read and you sharing this. | Briannan | Posted on 2006-11-03 00:00:00 | by Briannan | [ Reply to This ] | |
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