Description: just another bad day inspired me to write this
help me -------------------------------------------
my senses dull and my mind goes numb
all i can think of is the gun
thoughts of suicide streak through my mind
everyone has left ME behind!
no more hope for the future
the past has become my haunting creature
but here i am still alive trying to figure out what is my drive?
does anyone care anymore?
or have i become like a deadweight on the floor?
help me now when i need it most
cause its hitting me hard, the fact that no longer through life can i coast!
I think the last line would be good if you didn't force the rhyme. You aren't left behind. You can find people that are willing to care for you. If you ever need to talk, I'm here to isten. Katana
Submission Name: help me
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