Our platonic yet symbolic love
Transversing through the dreams
Of my lonely nights.
Inert memories cloud my mind
Lying immobilized in my dormant bed.
Eyes transfixed on the ceiling,
Recalling memories of days past.
My body’s oscillations
Concur with a perpetual timing.
Lost in disillusional hallucinatory moments
Acquiring knowledge of Aphrodite’s
My first impression, that has to suck. I mean to be tempted by this girl that you are friends with and have to restrain yourself. Now do you think this girl's a goddess or something because you are talking about Aprodite? Because if you really think that highly of her you should say something... But anyway first impressions...It's good, but I think it's a little wordy, um...yeah but still good. I'm not sure exactly what to make of it. I can't say that I've ever been there done that. Sorry. Good luck with that though. ~Ashley~