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Author: CFHillyard
ASL Info:    22/M/Washington state
Elite Ratio:    1.91 - 53 /36 /13
Words: 82
Class/Type: Poetry /Me
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just a new one iv written


I am a demon in disguise
always looking up at blood red skies
nothing comforts me or holds me dear
my life is wrenched by my mortal fear

many secrets i hide within
begging the lord to forgive my sins
i try my best to hide the truth
constantly running from the sleuth

so here i am just like you
a lonely mortal nothing new
take my hand if you dare
ill try my best to show i care

Submitted on 2006-11-03 15:43:13     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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  this is good. sounds kinda dark and menacing to begin with. the rhythm and rhyme are excellent.
this is a great piece!
| Posted on 2006-11-08 00:00:00 | by whirl | [ Reply to This ]
  Again, I applaud you're skills as a writer. I like the end as well. The last two lines make it have more meaning.
| Posted on 2006-11-03 00:00:00 | by Katana Ryoko | [ Reply to This ]

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