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    dots Submission Name: Wanteddots

    Author: raviegirl
    Elite Ratio:    1.62 - 0/0/1
    Words: 203
    Class/Type: Poetry/Depressed
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       This is a poem I wrote after thinking of all of the hurting that I have been forced to suffer at the mercy of others that are believed to be superior to me. Pain that I needed to let go. Not physically, no, I am stronger than that. This was the only way I felt right letting my emotions out as I thought of what it would be like in Heaven.

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    I feel so alone
    As I try to fight the shadows that bind me
    It's tearing me apart
    Things are whispered in my ear
    I want to give up, to move to the safe
    Sanctuary that is my mind
    But is that really safe?
    Won't I be locked inside myself?
    Driven to insanity by my isolation
    There's nowhere to run, nowhere to hide
    I'm being swallowed by my fear

    As I'm almost lost in the void
    My mind is clear
    My body is calm
    I hear another voice, this one is not the evil
    Whispers of my fear, but a strong voice that
    Rings with calm and clarity
    It talks of light
    I let myself go and relax
    The tears, they come and they don't stop
    Ever so slowly, the shadows disappear
    I stand alone, but yet I stand beside
    Millions; millions just like me
    And here
    I belong

    I have found a world in which I have
    Found myself and who I was supposed to be
    I am no longer lost
    No longer hated
    No longer treated with disdain because
    I am different
    Here, I am liked for who I am
    And what I've done
    Here, I am wanted.

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