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    dots Submission Name: Beauty From Another Worlddots
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    Author: Fougene
    ASL Info:    17/m/Saskatoon Canada
    Elite Ratio:    4.57 - 23/22/39
    Words: 83
    Class/Type: Poetry/Love
    Total Views: 585
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 553



    Description:
       Kind of creative...I suppose.


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    dotsBeauty From Another Worlddots
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    To see

    To hear

    To touch

    To smell

    The flowing hair dancing in the wind

    Is to hold

    To feel

    To let go

    To warm

    Angelic hands that gently draw my heart

    To materialize

    To personify

    The perfect soul that holds me close

    Is to love

    A beauty from another world




    Submitted on 2006-11-03 21:16:45     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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    ||| Comments |||
      It doesn't matter what it is about. It is gentle and relaxing to read while filled with a longing. I like it.
    Katana
    | Posted on 2006-11-05 00:00:00 | by Katana Ryoko | [ Reply to This ]
      I like it, but I'm not sure what you mean by this peom, I mean yes, it explains it, but what do you want?
    | Posted on 2006-11-05 00:00:00 | by Gothic Misery | [ Reply to This ]


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