Description: what can i say about this one...its what i wrote while drinking lol
my retreat -------------------------------------------
alcohol is my retreat
its where i go when i sense defeat
broken is my will to care
never my thoughts can i share
does it matter that i drink?
do you care what i think?
help me then to end this drain
its ruining my life and driving me insane
drunk again no reason why
never the power to stand up to try
for i am as weak as a mouse
trapped inside this haunted house
so wake me up from this daze
let me know that im in a craze
cause i cant admit what i cannot see
and ill never see what i dont want to be
im a drunk and it is true
iv nothing left but YOU
You've penned a good look at all alcohol does to a person's life. The word "alcohol" is misspelled, but that seemed appropriate in a poem dealing with the effects alcohol has on the brain's power to think. Pen on, Sharon
Alcohol is never the answer to anyone's problems. It only makes matters worse. Break the addiction and you will feel like a new man that can do anything. Katana
aww this makes me think of my boyfriend. i try to keep him away from that stuff cause i care about him, but i don't want him thinking i'm trying to control him...ya know. well good write. keep up the great work. </3 lisa
My Friend this is a very true and great write I know the felling you are describing because I was addicted to Crystal Meth for 5 years I am now Clean and sober for a year and a half THANK GOD This write I feel is a very strong write where you are reaching out for help The only advice I would give is Please realize noone can help ypu end an addiction You have to do that yourself I know you can do ot!!! If you ever need a shoulder to lean on or a Friend to just listen to what you have to say Im always here Just pm me God Bless Ron
Submission Name: my retreat
