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Just A Kiss

Author: lah
ASL Info:    20/F/Thousand oaks
Elite Ratio:    2.23 - 26 /47 /36
Words: 159
Class/Type: Poetry /Passion
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Average Vote:    5.0000
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Me and my sis were talking about kissing so yup.....

Just A Kiss

No one said it would be like this
An undeniable perfection
An incredible obsession
So hypnotizing so beautiful

An emotional connection
Expressed through physical attraction
Such an innocent reaction

Lips so seductive
Give into each silken taste
Just give in
Discover every parcel
Just discover

Feel the exchange of breathe
He glosses your lips
You nip his bewitching brink

Eyes gently closed
He finally takes control
Heart begins to fasten
Your mouth has a mind of its own

Its no longer just a taste
Its an embrace of relation
An incredible sensation
A connection of no longer mine but ours

My lips are yours
to taste and discover
Feel down your back
In your chest
And straight to your innocence

But the moments just begun
He raises his arm
Slow and leery
Conceives your heart beat
And begins to use his hands…….

Submitted on 2006-11-04 01:33:09     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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  that was just so good...i feel that way every have a way with words...nice read..
| Posted on 2006-11-24 00:00:00 | by DeathsWife | [ Reply to This ]
  Hey... this is actually really good... You should tell me which one to comment next..

By the way.... I am a little known for leaving harsh ass comments, so your [censored] has to be really good for me to give in and say so.... just a thought
| Posted on 2006-11-23 00:00:00 | by psyko | [ Reply to This ]
  This is a pretty cool poem. I like the flow and the rime. And I'll read it again in time.
I love poems of romance where lovers lose control and share a kiss tha caresses the soul.
I don't mean to go over board. This is good work. Keep'em coming.

The Poor Man's Poet.
| Posted on 2006-11-04 00:00:00 | by Bobby K | [ Reply to This ]
  this is an awsome poem. i think the reason i like it so much is because it is 100% true. i have been there...and obviously so have you ;) keep writing there masterpieces and i will keep coming back for more.

we should talk on AIM sometime

| Posted on 2006-11-04 00:00:00 | by kession | [ Reply to This ]

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