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    dots Submission Name: Vampiredots
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    Author: Xx_bang_bang_
    Elite Ratio:    1.89 - 23/24/19
    Words: 148
    Class/Type: Misc/Misc
    Total Views: 152
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 993



    Description:
       Can be used as poetry or lyrics. But like 777sacrites777 pointed out, if used as poetry the repeated stanza should be removed.


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    dotsVampiredots
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    Vampire

    I am the walking dead
    The turner of my clan
    Black blood is what I crave
    As it's pulsing through your veins

    So I値l caress your neck
    Before I bite the flesh
    Ignore the pain
    Love the gain
    A life of immortal hollowness

    Metallic taste on my lips
    From the rip that drips
    Hiding in the shadows for far to long
    By the daylight I値l be gone

    So I値l caress your neck
    Before I bite the flesh
    Ignore the pain
    Love the gain
    A life of immortal hollowness

    No reflection in the mirror
    To show my blackened eyes
    I知 a heartless, soulless creature
    One you may despise

    So I値l caress your neck
    Before I bite the flesh
    Ignore the pain
    Love the gain
    A life of immortal hollowness

    I知 a creature of the night.
    A creature of the night.




    Submitted on 2006-11-04 02:54:11     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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    ||| Comments |||
      good write, but if these weren't lyrics, i didn't like the repeated stanza. my favorite lines were:
    "I知 a heartless, soulless creature
    One you may despise".
    keep up the good work.
    </3 lisa
    | Posted on 2006-11-04 00:00:00 | by 777sacrites777 | [ Reply to This ]
      I like the flow of your writing I think the poem is good.
    | Posted on 2006-11-04 00:00:00 | by Gothic Misery | [ Reply to This ]



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