hope

Author: CFHillyard ASL Info:    22/M/Washington state Elite Ratio:    1.91 - 53 /36 /13 Words: 117

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hope

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have you let the hope escape your head? do you dwell on all the hurtfull things i have said? forced yourself to forget all we could have had only remembering how easy it was to make me mad im sorry its to late now i know but of this hope i shall never let go for your my dream your all that keeps me clean so when you grab his hand in yours know that i will never close these doors for i am trapped in the past conjuring up ways to try and make it last i dont want to better me or you i want US to be what makes it through

Submitted on 2006-11-04 10:09:37     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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Seems you screwed up pretty bad. This reminds me of my dad and what happened with his wife. It's true he keeps those doors open even after a year and it does him no good. Katana

| Posted on 2006-11-05 00:00:00 | by Katana Ryoko | [ Reply to This ]

It looks like if you did hurt her it was pretty bad

| Posted on 2006-11-05 00:00:00 | by Gothic Misery | [ Reply to This ]

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