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    dots Submission Name: hopedots
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    Author: CFHillyard
    ASL Info:    22/M/Washington state
    Elite Ratio:    1.91 - 53/36/13
    Words: 117
    Class/Type: Poetry/Longing
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    dotshopedots
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    have you let the hope escape your head?
    do you dwell on all the hurtfull things i have said?
    forced yourself to forget all we could have had
    only remembering how easy it was to make me mad
    im sorry

    its to late now i know
    but of this hope i shall never let go
    for your my dream
    your all that keeps me clean
    so when you grab his hand in yours
    know that i will never close these doors

    for i am trapped in the past
    conjuring up ways to try and make it last
    i dont want to better me or you
    i want US to be what makes it through




    Submitted on 2006-11-04 10:09:37     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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    ||| Comments |||
      Seems you screwed up pretty bad. This reminds me of my dad and what happened with his wife. It's true he keeps those doors open even after a year and it does him no good.
    Katana
    | Posted on 2006-11-05 00:00:00 | by Katana Ryoko | [ Reply to This ]
      It looks like if you did hurt her it was pretty bad
    | Posted on 2006-11-05 00:00:00 | by Gothic Misery | [ Reply to This ]


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