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Author: darkwiccan14
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Class/Type: Random Thoughts /I am dead inside
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i'm bored... just sittin here wasting time...omg this makes no sense...oh


So little time,
and nothing to do,
with anyone and you.

So many thoughts,
race through my thick head,
but yet I still lay in this isolated bed.

Time is precious and should never be wasted,
but why say that when all I have done in life,
is just tap?
Things take time, and everyone needs to get it done,
but one so forlorn as myself has not even thought time through.

Things make no sense anymore,
could it be everyone had done the same like me?

Submitted on 2006-11-04 13:03:28     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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  that's deep ashley
| Posted on 2006-12-18 00:00:00 | by satanstwin | [ Reply to This ]

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