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    dots Submission Name: wardots
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    Author: vencix
    ASL Info:    19/m/mi
    Elite Ratio:    1.61 - 19/88/66
    Words: 70
    Class/Type: Poetry/Serious
    Total Views: 744
    Average Vote:    1.0000
    Bytes: 326



    Description:
       this one i delted and redid i thought it was the pits i have choice words but to keep it clean


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    dotswardots
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    war it is the scerage of the earth. beast and monsters use it to gain control over what they do not have. But we humans have taken it and have built tanks and guns to kill each other. As bombs and gernades go off on each other one by one we fall. Till the day there will be no one left to fight. And then who will win the war.




    Submitted on 2006-11-04 14:36:45     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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