I can only tell that your poem caught my attention a lot, I couldn't stop reading I liked the flow on this one. Good job. I personally am a fan of eyes, you can tell so much in the eyes of someone. When you don't know what someone want, thinks or feels just look into their eyes
I really liked this. It wasn't what I expected when I saw the title, but it was still very good. The flow was perfect and so was your word choice. I could really see everything in my head. Especially in your second stanza. And the the story was intruiging. I pictured a murderer who was caught, and is now trying to escape again. I thought it was cool how you left the end that way. It's like one of those scary movies you see without the happy ending. You know something bad might happen but they end it before you can see. Ok, well maybe it isn't exactly like that, but it is sort of. Alright, I'm just going to stop now. But anyways, good poem.