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    dots Submission Name: to muchdots

    Author: girly101
    Elite Ratio:    3.79 - 292/310/149
    Words: 74
    Class/Type: Misc/Depressed
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       i no it sucks
    ill delete it when i no longer feel this way i geuss

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    dotsto muchdots

    sitting on my floor
    up against the wall
    rocking back and forth
    i promised i wouldent but now its so hard
    knife held in hand
    a thousand thoughts flow through my mind
    a million words i want to say
    somemany thoughts trapped within my mind until this day
    tears rain from my eyes
    screams echo in my mind
    want to see the crimson
    want to let it show
    i want to let everything go

    Submitted on 2006-11-04 15:30:05     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      heh. reminds me of my life in high school. however i didnt hesitate, i just hacked away without thought. yes, thats right, i was a cutter. i'd still be doing it if it wasnt for being jail. i was in for such a long time that when i came out and tried to go back to it, it just wasnt the same. you did really good on this.
    | Posted on 2010-09-18 00:00:00 | by Thief | [ Reply to This ]
      i like this, i hope that you aren't really feeling this cause it would be sad but i love the feeling in the poem whether it comes from experiance or just whimsy, and as so many said to me when i was writing stuff like this don't say it sux cause then people wont read it, it doesn't suck its good, i hope that you don't delete it cause i like it
    Thanks for sharing
    | Posted on 2006-11-04 00:00:00 | by PryncessVynom | [ Reply to This ]
      lol this is the FIRST poem of urs i have read and liked acctully.. it had emotiona raw and good i loved this poem to be honest ur a good poet but u always lack REAL emotions u try to damn hard to rhyme and in here u diddent and i loved it <3 so dont delete this its the best u have ever written

    ~ Love Always Your Sister Ashley
    | Posted on 2006-11-05 00:00:00 | by Oscura | [ Reply to This ]

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