very good. first of all, i believe we are all failures. i can relate to this because i remember having such a feeling at a time. it scared the hell out of me but also a rush. a rush to keep going. to prove myself wrong. result: i think i still failed.
i don't like how in the second couplet (is that the right word?) you use r instead of are just doesn't look right, i love the poem as a whole though, i love the last word just makes the poem....how do i word this, i would say pop but that just sounds stupid but it makes it awesome. Vynom