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    dots Submission Name: Rose in Bloom (haiku)dots
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    Author: smartblond
    ASL Info:    18/F/IL
    Elite Ratio:    3.91 - 97/114/33
    Words: 11
    Class/Type: Poetry/Nature
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       Ok I'm so bored so I'm writing everything that comes into my head.


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    dotsRose in Bloom (haiku)dots
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    Slowly opening
    Blushing a radiant red
    Perfection in bloom




    Submitted on 2006-11-04 17:31:48     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      this is simple, yet very good.
    nice choice of words, to put together in the
    arrangement of the Haiku.
    explains the meaning, definiatly.
    | Posted on 2006-11-04 00:00:00 | by rAbit | [ Reply to This ]
      Beautiful. I like the third line; "Perfection in bloom"
    I also like the topic. Roses are my favorite. This was really good.

    ~Piper
    | Posted on 2006-11-05 00:00:00 | by PiperH | [ Reply to This ]


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