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Love Doesn't Wash Away

Author: Malcolm Bishop
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Love Doesn't Wash Away

Every time the sky is saddened, lets fall it's tears/
I look up and bathe my face in it's brilliance, no fears/
the patter of the rain as it strikes the street/the coolness of sky's touch on my cheeks/
Salt falls from my eyes, mixes with the rain/
blends in, can't be seen, same as my pain/
the life and times of me/one half of a whole in this soliloquy/ my love is gone, so am I/ I bathe myself every time the heaven's cry/

love doesn't wash away/ it stays on you through blackest of nights, brightest of days/ love doesn't wash away/ the rains may come till judgement, but it remains the same as the first day/...

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