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    dots Submission Name: Life Lessonsdots
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    Author: darkwinged
    ASL Info:    17/F/MI
    Elite Ratio:    3.61 - 184/217/74
    Words: 120
    Class/Type: Misc/Misc
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    Average Vote:    2.0000
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    dotsLife Lessonsdots
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    At one point
    You realize
    You learn
    That everything
    Does NOT go your way

    At one point
    You will realize
    You will learn
    That to gain
    Does NOT mean you have to lose

    At one point
    You will realize
    You will learn
    That family is everything
    They are always there

    At one point
    You will realize
    You will learn
    That boys AREN'T everything
    And it the friends you need the most care for.

    At one point
    You realize
    You learn
    That everything happens for a reason
    Even though we may not know it at the time.

    At one point
    I've realized
    I've learned
    That life comes and go...

    What is life?




    Submitted on 2006-11-04 22:01:01     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      I like this for the fact, it has truth.
    great work, on the meaning, and how people learn lessons in life.
    through wrong and rights way, they learn.
    | Posted on 2006-11-05 00:00:00 | by rAbit | [ Reply to This ]
      The lessons you have learnt are really life's most cardinal lessons.The real matured understanding of life makes us value the aspects of our lives which we sometimes take for granted.True love and care which comes from family and friends is the only thing we can count on in our lives.I liked your poem as it is emphasizing on deeply felt and closely seen aspect of life.Good job.
    | Posted on 2006-11-05 00:00:00 | by Ramneet | [ Reply to This ]
      good write..it sorta of lacks...um.....depth....that's it ...hey i l;ike the idea though...(life is finding that which gives you peace....if you want to talk write me)
    heartless coel
    | Posted on 2006-11-06 00:00:00 | by His goth child | [ Reply to This ]


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