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Mixed Messages

Author: Gothic Misery
ASL Info:    25/F/NV
Elite Ratio:    0.44 - 90 /39 /32
Words: 185
Class/Type: Poetry /Angry
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Mixed Messages

The man that you love is the monster you fear
My eyes can't see what is wrong with me
I'm looking for a fix to make me feel ok
When I feel lost I just slip away
When you are stoned, I am drunk
And it's too late and it's too bad
Don't think of me when your sad
Turn your eyes to the sky
His tears keep burning holes into his sick abusive lies
Starve the mind of pain and hunger
Leaving me yet again in wonder
I couldnt keep it locked inside
For once I'd thought you'd try
I can tell myself I'm in control
That I'm better off not to fall
Words that I'm saying are starting to get old
I need you out of my soul
I just don't care anymore
Won't cry these tears anymore
You thought one day I'd be your wife
But our love only has a temporary life
No more choking on regrets to keep you satisfied
So leave me here will all your lies

Submitted on 2006-11-05 02:37:10     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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  I like, a love that is losted in the clouds of no hope. Trusted me i understand everything you are saying. Like someone keeps puting your love on the floor. A un-care-ing heart now that is the true art of doom. Can't wait for your next one. H.Redd
| Posted on 2006-12-25 00:00:00 | by H.Redd | [ Reply to This ]
  i really like "when u r stoned , i am drunk" i think that ur say that u r both some kind of wrong ,but they go together.
i rly enjoyed reading it u express well, u hav detail and not just a outline
| Posted on 2006-11-07 00:00:00 | by kantvnh | [ Reply to This ]

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