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    dots Submission Name: Vowdots
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    Author: Soulraven
    ASL Info:    22/Male/Illinois
    Elite Ratio:    3.87 - 475/441/124
    Words: 90
    Class/Type: Poetry/Misc
    Total Views: 311
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    Bytes: 576



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    dotsVowdots
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    I don’t need anything from the world,
    But just you, little girl.
    Weaving your loving strong,
    I know this can’t be wrong.
    Falling into this now,
    To YOU I vow.
    I can see the green light,
    Coming from your red heart.
    Reached down low,
    I guess now you know, I love you so.
    Falling into this now,
    To ME I vow.
    Laws of natures a joke,
    All a grand hoax.
    Law of gravity I’m transcending.
    To love these words I’m sending.
    Falling into this now,
    To LOVE I vow.




    Submitted on 2004-01-28 18:51:53     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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    ||| Comments |||
      really cool man, this could very well be like a song or lullaby, this is really cool, keep it up
    | Posted on 2004-01-28 00:00:00 | by Trystam | [ Reply to This ]
      dig on the gravity transcending, pretty cool
    | Posted on 2004-01-28 00:00:00 | by love gone wrong | [ Reply to This ]
      a seem to like your writing style very much, keep it up
    | Posted on 2004-01-28 00:00:00 | by AntiLife | [ Reply to This ]


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