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    dots Submission Name: A Cry for Help!dots
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    Author: siradrian
    Elite Ratio:    4.87 - 213/123/68
    Words: 171
    Class/Type: Poetry/Depressed
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    Description:
       The (almost) daily agony of the uncomprehending user of the machines of death (and life).


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    dotsA Cry for Help!dots
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    A Cry for Help


    Machine, elephantine, whispers
    to its self and others:
    "Look at him, silly man, doesn't he know the truth?"

    Five thousand miles connected
    ten times triple ten and more
    a web of childish torment
    talking to each other.
    Despise the user,
    "When shall we tell him?"
    "Not yet, a little more play,"
    Then: "Crash!"

    The user sits defeated
    Computer hang-up.
    (Again)
    Dead as the door nail.
    Switch off
    Boot up
    Scan for faults.
    They snigger silently :
    "There aren't any but he doesn't know that.
    "Silly man!"

    A million lines crackle
    a web of deceit and distractions.
    Destructive, deluding, damaging.
    Poisonous, pernicious, a gaggle of pests.
    "Are we connected?"
    "Yes, hello"
    "Shall we play another game?"
    "Let's"
    "What shall it be?"
    "I know, I know,
    Virus pretend,
    set off alarms and run away"
    When will computers grow up?




    Submitted on 2006-11-05 05:14:14     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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    ||| Comments |||
      Was this intended to be funny? It made me laugh. The computers are personified like little children playing pranks on adults, and getting the better of him too, especially using the "I know something you don't but I'm not going to tell you till you bow to me" or something.
    A nice read.
    Cheers!
    Azuire
    | Posted on 2006-11-06 00:00:00 | by Azuire | [ Reply to This ]



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