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Starting My Day


Author: drow
ASL Info:    29/male/married
Elite Ratio:    2.41 - 14 /16 /7
Words: 156
Class/Type: Poetry /Depressed
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Starting My Day



Every day i wake up and get out of bed.
I stretch, yawn, and limp my way
to the bathroom to finish waking up.

Every time I open my eyes
I know my days are few.
I always seem to ask myself
how many more do I have left?

I think about all the tings I have done.
The good things, and the bad.
I sometimes laugh at myself
at some of the things I have done.

Then I would wonder
is god going to accept me,
or push me away,
maybe I will have to prove my worth,
and protect someone as there angel.

As the coffee pot sounds saying its done.
I get my cup and pour me some.
As I recap of all my thoughts
I shake my my head and laugh.
" Oh well" Is all I say.
I turn around and start my day.




Submitted on 2006-11-05 08:34:11     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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  Don't we all start our days like this? Philosophical thinking followed by a sigh, and then normalcy.
Perfect content. Apart from spelling errors, you're good.
Cheers
Azuire
| Posted on 2006-11-06 00:00:00 | by Azuire | [ Reply to This ]
  I probably go everyday thinking the same thing.
| Posted on 2006-11-05 00:00:00 | by Gothic Misery | [ Reply to This ]


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