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    Author: DAlin
    Elite Ratio:    2.12 - 82/137/75
    Words: 34
    Class/Type: Poetry/Serious
    Total Views: 795
    Average Vote:    5.0000
    Bytes: 215



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    dotsFeelingsdots
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    See
    Be the first to know,
    A light
    A simple feeling glow

    Wrong by words?
    I do not think so
    Read between the lines and see
    A fog above the clear shaped mistery.




    Submitted on 2006-11-05 10:15:58     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      Not to shabby, very short, but I don't have a long attention span so it works for me. Like the line "Wrong by words? I do not think so, read between the lines and see" those lines I dig.
    | Posted on 2006-11-05 00:00:00 | by Lil gal | [ Reply to This ]


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