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Dark Cloud (somewhat revised)


Author: CFHillyard
ASL Info:    22/M/Washington state
Elite Ratio:    1.91 - 53 /36 /13
Words: 232
Class/Type: Poetry /Longing
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just another of my old ones i was able to retrieve


Dark Cloud (somewhat revised)



Forgive me for ive been bad to you.
Its not that i wanted to.
Its just all Iv ever known.
But look and see I have grown and now I am A whole new me.

I understand that I was never grand.
That it was all in my head and now constantly I wish I were dead.

My lifes always been dark and you brought me light.
But now a cloud blocks my sun.
Forcing me to fight with a knife against a gun.

Odds are against me but I dont care.
Cause I know someday ill once again run my fingers through your hair.

Iv been cruel and unkind.
I think my childhood had poisoned my mind.
Iv seen my scowl. I truely can be foul. Im sorry love, forgive me please.
Im begging here on my knees! Dreaming up our future memories.

So forget the bad and remember the good cause now I understand I havnt done all i should.
So here i am a healing man praying that you
will bring light again to this darkened land.
Be my sun again remove my cloud.
And if its true that you still do, tell me you love me but please be loud!
Because only you can remove this dark dark cloud.




Submitted on 2006-11-05 12:28:35     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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  Beautiful. But again break up the lines.
Katana
| Posted on 2006-11-05 00:00:00 | by Katana Ryoko | [ Reply to This ]


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