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When you need me

Author: elseibi
ASL Info:    20/f/uk
Elite Ratio:    3.13 - 228 /180 /38
Words: 62
Class/Type: Poetry /Misc
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When you need me

When you feel like you've got nothing,
and the whole world's on your shoulders,
when living is just living,
walking forwards, getting older.

I want you to know that you're not alone,
though the pain i know i can't cure,
i'll listen to your sorrow,
try and help you reach tommorow.

I'll be here, a friend, forever more.

Submitted on 2006-11-05 16:15:18     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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  That's another lovely poem, Lou. A very kind and loving message for a friend. : )
| Posted on 2007-03-15 00:00:00 | by mdsouza | [ Reply to This ]
  thats sweet. i liked it.
| Posted on 2006-11-05 00:00:00 | by WD-40 | [ Reply to This ]
  Lovely! What more comforting thoughts could a friend have!
| Posted on 2006-11-18 00:00:00 | by Ron Cole | [ Reply to This ]

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