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    dots Submission Name: Stay Goldahhhdots
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    Author: WD-40
    ASL Info:    21/F/Bangleby
    Elite Ratio:    0.95 - 206/72/10
    Words: 26
    Class/Type: Misc/Misc
    Total Views: 986
    Average Vote:    4.0000
    Bytes: 183



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    dotsStay Goldahhhdots
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    step back for
    lifes too short
    fuck all the shit
    and just be.
    BE
    not UPLIFTING

    sparkle the skies
    As you stand on commen ground.




    Submitted on 2006-11-05 17:02:52     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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    ||| Comments |||
      no need to cuss man good poem but kids come on here kep it cool you got poetictalent
    | Posted on 2009-03-01 00:00:00 | by blackdemigod13 | [ Reply to This ]
      good poem yo. i like it its all like forget about it!

    buster
    | Posted on 2007-09-26 00:00:00 | by BusterLILblock | [ Reply to This ]
      dude you didnt sigh
    | Posted on 2006-12-27 00:00:00 | by social circus | [ Reply to This ]
      i'M confused man . . . . . . . . . . . . I don't gett it . . . . . . . . . . . I'll read it again some other time. I guess it's cuz I feel like puking . . . . gosh. . . . .

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    G FREAK
    | Posted on 2006-12-19 00:00:00 | by GothamFreak | [ Reply to This ]
      I like the way you think!!! A great poet is bourn !
    This was mad and should you keep it up I wou;ld like to see some longer ones? Well for now I say good bye
    Kelley Frost
    | Posted on 2006-12-01 00:00:00 | by whendt | [ Reply to This ]
      PEace be the journey
    | Posted on 2006-11-06 00:00:00 | by Silenced poet | [ Reply to This ]
      I like when I see common themes in my poems with other peoples and the different words that are chosen. I would write the same message and use more or different words, but it's still the same message. Shine on, illuminate, attain your dogstar, be a human. Good stuff.
    | Posted on 2006-11-05 00:00:00 | by NoMartyr | [ Reply to This ]


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