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    dots Submission Name: When Science becomes Religiondots
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    Author: Charles F Kane
    ASL Info:    34
    Elite Ratio:    1.43 - 4/17/14
    Words: 121
    Class/Type: Rant/Satire
    Total Views: 623
    Average Vote:    5.0000
    Bytes: 842



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       What kind of religion does scientists have?


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    dotsWhen Science becomes Religiondots
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    When Science becomes Religion
    when truth becomes God
    then what becomes your jesus
    Scientists I ask you
    Who is to be crucified
    for your sins, Can you answer me?

    Whos your Jesus
    Whos your saviour
    And where is your heaven
    amongst your test-tubes
    chemical overdrives and
    nuclear detonations?
    Do you see your God
    in the atom when you split it?

    And what is your church
    Do you have a temple?
    Or do you think you need one
    to pray to your deity
    whatever it is
    What is your last supper?
    Do you drink red wine
    as a substitute for the
    salvation blood?

    When Science becomes religion
    Then what becomes YOUR faith?

    Im waiting for an answer




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      i like it, i'm a huge fan of satire. even when i don't agree. anyone who can play a well phrased argument and fill it with clever analagies i say cudos to you. but can you handle a rebutal

    When Religion becomes Science
    when god becomes your truth
    then what becomes your Gallieo
    Followers I ask you
    Who will save the innocent
    and keep death at bay, Can you answer me?

    Whos your doctor
    Whos your engineer
    And where are your cures
    amongst your scripture and sacrifice
    war and
    bloodshed?
    Do you see your answer
    in the sick as you condem them?

    And where is your logic
    Do you have a way to kill the pain?
    Or do you think you need one
    to pray to your hollow god
    who ever it is
    What is your miracle drug?
    Do you drink in souls
    as a substitute for the
    for solutions?

    When religion becomes science
    Then what becomes YOUR solution?

    Im waiting for an answer

    | Posted on 2006-11-06 00:00:00 | by in shadow | [ Reply to This ]
      Marvelous poem, Charles! What scientists fail to realize is that God's wisdom is infinite, while that of humans is finite! God realized the futility of man's reasoning about his being, and gave us to come to him through faith. Faith supercedes intellect, and can participate in the infinite!
    | Posted on 2006-11-06 00:00:00 | by Ron Cole | [ Reply to This ]
      I LUV IT LUV IT LUV IT!!!!!!
    my own side note: i think we should sacrifice the scientist...even though it would be repaying for our sins and only their own....but it would still be fun to watch....sry im morbid this morning.

    i love the content, luv the style, luv the flow and line breaks and all that other stuff. its great.
    | Posted on 2006-11-06 00:00:00 | by Adden Lee | [ Reply to This ]


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