Veins protrude with glamoure
As purply blue sky storms through
Mental erections from a would be
Safe home grow flacid
As reality conquers the illusion
Incaged as a venomous beast
Obsessed I yearn escape
yern should be yearn, not sure why its called vodka, i think that if you made it longer it would be much better, sometimes short works but in my opinion it doesn't here, although its good it would be better longer. Good job whether you change it or not But let me know if you write more on it Vynom
Submission Name: Vodka
