the language in this is very... rhythmic and joyful, serene yet jumpy, reflective and idiosyncratic. your line breaks, enjambment and lack of punctuation works wonderfully in this; i always love it when it all fits and flows together: a complete picture, yet blurry in that way emotive imagery seems to me.
this scene made me picture snuggling up to a lover on the couch, watching television and eating bonbons, or perhaps wanting this big-boned fella to be there with you as you idle away in philosophic thoughts... yup.
This is really clever To me you are describing how something must feel as we devour it chewing before it enters our system to provide nourishment for our body I have never read a write tackling this topic and must admit you did it very well Excellent Job!!! God Bless Ron
Please if you get a chance Please take a look at some of my writes and let me know what you think I have just added 2 new ones today Thank You Ron